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Design Critique Submission by xyphid Design Critique Submission by xyphid
selling this for a joke price
contact,
levanon@gmail.com
or by msn messenger: dlevanon@hotmail.com
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:iconinsanemetal:
InsaneMetal Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010
This is incredibly awesome. Congrats.
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:iconparvezansari:
ParvezAnsari Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010
Nice design. You are a great artist :)
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:iconxyphid:
xyphid Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
thank you, im flattered ;)
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:iconparvezansari:
ParvezAnsari Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2010
My pleasure :)
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:iconbebinho:
bebinho Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2009
Amazing website :) fav :)
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:iconfreshz:
freshZ Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009
WHAT THE HELL !. . .

. . .godlike


. . .awesome

. . .:O ! ! !
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:iconbigdizzay:
bigdiZZay Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2009
I featured this artwork here [link] i hope you don't mind :hug:
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:iconxyphid:
xyphid Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thanks :hug: great collection there, favd
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:iconbigdizzay:
bigdiZZay Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2009
:hug:
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:iconmelekr:
meleKr Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2009
amazing work ! FAV!
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:iconjacksondaniell:
JacksonDaniell Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2009
This shits hot you should develop this stuff for your own website and host yours truly
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:iconmaoractive:
maoractive Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2009  Hobbyist Interface Designer
תגיד אחי אתה פרילנסר? חוצמזה, את כל זה למדת לבד, או למדת ממש... אם כן, איפה? :)
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:iconmd-06:
mD-06 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2009  Professional Interface Designer
looks very nice
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:iconlaurie-j:
Laurie-J Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2009  Professional Interface Designer
I think you should update it and space things out, show more critiques. Then you have a good chance of winning this contest ;)
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:iconxyphid:
xyphid Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thanks for the comment, like I said, if chosen, i will work it out as much as they want. but ive done it as a refreshment from already flooding commission work.
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:iconlaurie-j:
Laurie-J Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2009  Professional Interface Designer
ah, I see. Well good luck :)
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:iconlord-shot:
Lord-Shot Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
the disgin in general is very good. have a lot of quality and style web 2.0.

looks very interactive, really nice
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:iconcnsmeira:
cnsmeira Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2009
very good design!
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:iconsinews:
SinewS Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2009
Very original, good work :)
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:iconneadodesigns:
neadodesigns Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2009
This is an amazing layout! Very cool, futuristic looking :)
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:iconhpbhatt:
hpbhatt Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2009  Professional Interface Designer
very nice layout.
& logo is too good.
great job buddy.
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:iconpetrart671:
petrart671 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2009   Interface Designer
This is crazy awesome bro!
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:icondepthskins:
depthskins Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2009
The header area is really nice and you did some nice things up there. The navigation for example is lovely and I like the broken line effect you did under the logo. All really nice effects.

The fundamental problem with this design is that there's overkill on icons., I like some of them like the globe icon but there isn't need for so much. They over-power content and clutter the design.

I don't like your footer area at all. Once again it's cluttered with icons and the lines between the text is a huge no no. If you're going to do that, make the lines much more subtle.

The design should also be able to hold a lot more critiques than 3 under 'featured'.

A lot of things need to be taken away from this design because design is the absence of complexity.
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:iconxyphid:
xyphid Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
critique area can expand, thats the point of it, to infinity.
icons like the earth and other stuff are all in the position of 'suggestions'.
like I said, if chosen, I'll work with you further
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:iconrondesign:
ronDesign Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2009
hardass design :)
loved the icons! you have to teach me :D
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:iconxyphid:
xyphid Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
:hug:
someday :D

but start by trying without a teacher
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:iconwilsoninc:
wilsoninc Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2009  Professional Interface Designer
woa mate! :D impressive work! :)
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:iconsnoddy:
Snoddy Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
really awesome!! the best for the contest that i watch it!
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:iconbnz-designs:
bNz-designs Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2009
really nice , i like the navi =)
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:iconk-record:
K-record Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2009   Interface Designer
I love it!! <3
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:icondegodson:
degodson Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2009  Professional Filmographer
kick-ass!!
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:iconomis:
omis Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2009
nice job
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:iconblockjuice:
BlockJuice Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2009
it's somewhat...I don't know the word for it, ironic that you designed a site for design critique.
:lol:

other than that, great design and I like the sample text.
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:iconbigdizzay:
bigdiZZay Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2009
im so jelious lol. only thing i dont really like is the bottom footer. it looks smushed.
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:iconrudolfbos:
RudolfBos Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2009
That's what i thought as well! I like the design but the footer doesn't fit the layout. Fix That!

The rest is amazing!
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:icontheinsidenoob:
theinsidenoob Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2009
i like it.
but i thought it was suggested to use "handdrwan" stlye, not?
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:iconxyphid:
xyphid Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thankyou,

a suggestion is not an obligation am i right?
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:icontheinsidenoob:
theinsidenoob Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2009
right! :D
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:iconysr1:
YSR1 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2009
Man, this is amazing! :heart:
But it sucks that you're still a window user. :(
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:iconmircha69:
mircha69 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2009  Professional Interface Designer
oh you poor apple brainwashed people.....he did it without a mac and it;s kick ass...how the heck would a mac make it better? it's not like apple made photoshop or illustrator or whatever program he made it in....an artist computer?you make me laugh...a maxed out pc kicks mac's ass all over the place
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:iconysr1:
YSR1 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2009
Well let's just put it this way; PC is good, but Mac is better. :) No fence you all you PC lovers :P
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:iconxyphid:
xyphid Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
window user as in? o_o
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:iconmircha69:
mircha69 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2009  Professional Interface Designer
fuckin awesome design man! really cool stuff best one i've seen
good luck on the contest and may you enjoy the prize ;)
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:iconysr1:
YSR1 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2009
No, you're great artist with not an artist computer. :slow:
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:iconxyphid:
xyphid Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
:B
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:iconan1ken:
An1ken Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2009
He means you gotta get MAC
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:iconsilence-sk:
Silence-sk Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2009  Student Interface Designer
wow
thats perfect ;-)
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:iconxyphid:
xyphid Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
:hug:
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:iconalexandruiga:
alexandruiga Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2009
ha! :) mate. great design!
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:iconalexandruiga:
alexandruiga Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2009
shadows a bit unrealistic though ... :} but eye effective
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